I'll give you some credit that the animation is decent to an extent, but the major problem with this is the fact the video is not even finished. If you want to put unfinished projects on Newgrounds, there is a spot called Dumping Grounds where you can post tests, walk cycles, and unfinished projects like this one. Submitting under judgement is for 100% finished projects, so this will get a low score if not blamed. I'm aware this is your 1st animation, so please take my advice and try to improve. Good luck!