I liked the paper style, looks really fun and playful. I think the sfx could have been a bit better though. Still very nice work!
A short animation I done in my free time, it's my take on why flies buzz and where it all started!
All sounds were recorded by me except the only three music tracks in the animation, "Cowboy", "check it out" and "Newyear's" which were downloaded from http://www.freesfx.co.uk/
Thank you for watching!
I liked the paper style, looks really fun and playful. I think the sfx could have been a bit better though. Still very nice work!
I know what you mean about the sound, but it was kind of intentional in a way as I wanted it to sound like a spontaneous voice over. Probably for my next animation I will get someone who is experienced with sfx to do it. For this one I wanted to give it a go myself.
Thank you for watching the animation and for the feedback!
I like the style!
Thank you for the comment!
Heh,
Really good.
Thank you!
very creative good job
Thanks a lot!
I like the way you played that with the construction paper design
Automatic star for ingenuity and originality
It could have been done a little better
Sound effect weren't very good
stiry's cute and made me laugh a little
two stars for you, buddy
@KSnaffe514 Thanks for the feeback!
About the sound effects, I was trying to make it sound like a spontaneous voice over, so I just recorded all these sounds with my voice without making any changes to it.
And as you said, there is always place for improvement.
I really appreciate your comment, thank you for watching the video.