wth
hah..all i can say-
"BLAM THIS PIECE OF-" You know the rest ;)
Author Comments
First major Flash, I put a lot of time into it (too much, to be sure), it turned out pretty much like I wanted it to I guess. It isn't great, but I think it's pretty good. Check it out.
sound-boy responds:
Yeah, the score of 3.28 REALLY shows it's a "piece of crap," huh?
It's bad.
It was just crap. It didn't have a preloader first of all. No flash skills and you didn't even animate this SHIT yourself. No actual story. People on Newgrounds wants to be lazy. They want to see the story not interpret it.
Oh, by the way......you didn't deserve to play that Crappy Metallica song.
Good work
Well done m8. Keep up with the good work. A very good debut. :)
That could, I repeat *could* go somewhere...
There is definitly potential for this movie! May I advise you DO put a strict plot in, it will help the movie along.
You MUST, however, do your own animating if you want anything to happen to this movie.
Here you go
Since you wanted a constructive review, here it is.
First of all, you need a story.
Then, try animating yourself. Your movies will be alot better if you do that.
sound-boy responds:
There is definitely a story there. You just kind of have to look for it. Just take what I have there and make yourself a story. It's fun. Think of it as an experiment in open-ended plotting or something. There's definitely enough of somethingthere for me to be able to make up my interpretation of what is going on. Think about it for a bit.