Bruh. Lookl, Imma be brutally honest, This... this could have beeen way better. the walking animation could have been synced with the walkspeed a bit better, the scene was okay, but the whole suicide story is kinda unnecessary, and the whole spammed pokeball part was unnecessary. other than that, it's ok, i just dont see why people are getting killed. my tips are reduce animation speed for the walking a bit better, and if you make someone fall, pause the animation. i understand if you kept the walking animation to add to the humor, that's completely fine. but good drawing!!!! !!! !

Not bad for a beginner. Nice use of frame by frame and tweening where appropriate. The Art style and animation overall looks choppy and unfinished though.

That's that.
Now, if you can't take criticism, don't post your stuff online.
If you came here, expecting five stars and lots of praise all around, you're very mistaken.
And the thing is, nobody shat on you. You were given constructive criticism. Learn to deal with it or go start a tumblr and build your own echo chamber.

So you hate our community?
Well we're just honest.
And tbh, this animation was as bad as the shit I see on 9gag on regular sunday mornigs.
Srsly, somebody blame this.

yea no thanks this is just bad

The overall movie was less than mediocre because you made the mistake of prioritizing story ahead of character.

I wanted to learn more about the two characters at the start of your movie.

One of the only characters with an actual personality committed suicide.

The movie's story than deviated into a series of gags about kids killing themselves while playing Pokemon Go.

How does the suicide effect the other characters in your movie?

A character killing himself can easily move the story forward?

What was the motivation of your one character's suicide?

You can easily add a lot more material by focusing on what makes your characters tick.

A character with personality will make creating a new story come more naturally.

I have no other criticism of this overall movie.

It was a bit amusing but could have been a lot better.

-Mightydein