You mentioned this this your first lengthy animation so easy on you I will be. Honestly, I think if you keep at it you'll just get better and better. Some cliche jokes, but I'd be lying if I said it didn't arise a chuckle out of me. Some of my favorite animators started off with some "erm...what?" animations, and got better with time; as I hope is the case with you as well. Good luck.
NIce video, i like how you shot it and all the action in it. Fun little story. I would just say try to work on your audio so its easier to hear and keep practicing animation till you find your style. Keep it up!
thank you! i will!
it wasnt very intresting