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Hello. This part of the Animation Jam's 2nd Round that was about robots. I was really excited about this because I tried a new art style for my backgrounds and I wanted to see if it looked good.
The Sound Effects are from the Youtube's Audio Library and my iMovie, hilariously.
Body Falling Sound Effect by Iwan Sounds and DIY at: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vEOCQHkWn-4
I hope everyone can enjoy this shitty thing that I made.
Jeanyawesome responds:
Thanks for that.
nice work. fun art style and animation
Jeanyawesome responds:
Thank you. I was trying out a new art style to see how it would look.
What the heck??? Good animation, confusing plot.
Jeanyawesome responds:
Sorry if you didn't enjoy it.
The animation was okay, as was the sound, it could use improvement though. The main problem lies with the plot, it was too shallow and didn't really go anywhere. The punchline, if you could call it that, didn't make any sense and had no buildup.
Jeanyawesome responds:
Thank you for the criticism, and I'll try to improve the sound by the next one, but I think that part of why the plot's bad is because of the time I had and working on this alone wasn't helping, if you liked it thank you and if you didn't, thank you for looking at it and giving me your thoughts.
Animation is good. Story and sound garbage
Jeanyawesome responds:
Sorry if you didn't enjoy it, but I'll try to improve it for next time.
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