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My first animation

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This is my first animation. I will make more and I will try to improve. Hope you will enjoy my work.

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Nice animation, i loved the ending XD.

For a first try you did good. A small encounter with 2 characters and fight (Classic). But I feel that the actions are a bit slow. there is a small lack of sounds or a soundtrack. The characters are a bit simple but creative as the attacks and the ending.
You make a good job, not perfect but good, and keep doing more and better animations!
(3/10) Tho

Stickening responds:

Thank you very much! I will focus more on speed and sound on my next animation. Thanks for folowing and I hope you will also review my next poject.

For a first completed animation I must say there are lots of positives to take from this. Okay yes you need a lot of practice to really refine the skill and that takes time, but you already have the basics to start improving. Some nice fluid camera movement and some challenging animation involved. Keep up the good work!

Stickening responds:

I 've tryed to put all the basic things I know into this. Thank you and yes I will practice until i get better.

good for the first tame

The actions are a bit too slow in general, but the animation is not so bad for a first one ! You need to perfect a little bit more the drawings.
Don't stop there, go on improving yourself ! :)

Stickening responds:

Thanks I apreciate your comment. Sure I will exercise and improve.

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Score
1.84 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 1, 2016
3:52 AM EDT
Genre
Action