Not very good. Camera movement and light flicker. Try to reduce this things and watch some tutorials And if you use camera then disable autofocus and film in manual mode M. If you using phone theeen. I think you can remove autofocus too. Keep practising. And my stop motions are Unproffesional and i need to learn alot of things too :D

This is awful.
Yeah, I get it, "it's a test."
First of all, put your abilities to better use. You're not supposed to upload tests here. Even when you upload to the experimental category, people expect something that won't waste their time.
Second off, learn to take criticism. Reviews aren't here so you can prove them wrong, they're here so you can learn from your mistakes and improve.
Bottom line? Keep tests to yourself if you know they'll waste our time, and don't expect praise. Good luck.