Audio is a little off, really quiet and peaky. I've had a similar problem, try comparing your project to already existing NG movies to see how they compare. Maybe mess with your recording or mic settings too. Audio is surprisingly important
Thank you for the advice.
Very family guy eske, great work! This is very well made, good job on the background. For larger sweeping motions of the arms, they need a few more inbetweens, and the body should not be still the whole time. Maybe add a little motion by skewing it a bit to emphasize things the character is saying. Very well presented.
Thank you, skewing the body suggestion, I don't know why I didn't think to do but i will on my next one again thanks.