Intro and the round 1 is too long for a stick fight like this keep it down to 3 seconds tops
watch some stick fight and learn from them, this is sub par
here is my inspiration for good stick fights: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8FxOiL6i_S8
A DOTA 2 heroes that fight for their victory lol xD.
part 1 short film,
Intro and the round 1 is too long for a stick fight like this keep it down to 3 seconds tops
watch some stick fight and learn from them, this is sub par
here is my inspiration for good stick fights: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8FxOiL6i_S8
not bad, only complaint is that its a bit on the short side for lengh
i will upload the part 2 soon ,, xD thanks for the respond