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Equality first half

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Want to work on a few of these though explainer videos but would like to get some feedback before I carry on and dedicate too much time.


Please tell me what you think. Thanks

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It seems to be coming along well. The graphics and sound seem aligned well. there was a bit of humour that worked. If it was a different type of animation like a full comedy I'd say pick up the pace a bit as it was a bit slow, but it looks like your trying to make people think about something so having a bit of time to think is useful, so the pace for this is probably about right.

Gave it a lowish score because its not in a finished yet so shouldn't stay up, but when it is it will be of a good enough quality to keep up. Looking forward to the final piece.

This seems interesting enough, but it would be better if we could see the full video before judging if you should make more.

Great! Really moving animation. 5 stars. In terms of feedback, it had a good message, and the transition between frames was good. I appreciate the technique of speaking with no lip sync, but it would be nicer with some mouth movement. The music was effective. Great job, five stars.

PS. I've just made an animation myself and would appreciate it if you took some time to looking at it and commenting :)

Credits & Info

Views
781
Votes
91
Score
2.92 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 11, 2016
1:55 PM EDT
Genre
Other