So i made this gif http://socsanimations.deviantart.com/art/Ninja-vs-Watermelon-611716895 and then decided to turn it into a full short, just to practice making this sort of thing.
I don't usually make longer animations like this, usually just walk cycles and stuff, so feedback and critiques are very welcome.
Music: Raw adventure by Kevin Macleod
That was nice
So that was a nice film you have here I like the whole idea of ninja vs watermelon not sure the Mellon had much of a chance but in this film you made it look good you should make this more into a series of some sort it was pretty good of a film though
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Make this into a sort of series
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Watermelon never stood a chance lol
Great start. would have liked to see it go on a little longer, and maybe hear some slashing and splat sound effects. Other than that good job!
Thankyou! I'll be sure to add sound effects in future videos.
Of course the ninja wins! :D Was expecting the potential twist, but I'm glad it ended like it should've. Really slick animation too, and fast, had to watch a couple of times to catch that slice (looked the watermelon was slicing itself that first time). Creative; fluently done! Nice work.
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Thankyou, and yeh you're right, i should've made the slice a bit more noticeable, maybe a few more frames there would've done it. Thanks for the feedback!