This was well made, but I feel it deserved to be longer. I say that because I was starting to get into it and enjoy it, but then it was already over, I don't feel I had enough time to enjoy it. The art style was well done and the quality of the animation is high, so I'd like to see some more :) You're clearly onto something good and should look to develop it more. Perhaps something a but longer to really show off your skills :)
Cheers!