Alright, I can definitely see the inspiration from Salad Fingers.
Though there was a lot to be desired from this short.

I think what i disliked the most about this was that I wasn't sure if it was trying to be funny (in a dark humor sense) or if it wanted me to take it somewhat seriously. I think the latter was mostly because of the music.

I would also argue that pacing was too quick, which kinda ruins the creepy mood.

Mr.Bright might actually be a nice and somewhat funny character, if albeit sadistic and confused.
Though, I could barely understand him most of the time.