I liked it! I don't really have any advice. It was a 5 star animation in my opinion.
I'm making a commitment to post more stuff on my Newgrounds account because lets be honest, it's kind of bare..., not in artwork, I'm fine with that, animations will probably need LOADS of more work!!
So on my last Markiplier animated I was told that the animation looked a bit off and sloppy, so hopefully it doesn't look as sloppy...hopefully, maybe...sigh, still a long ways to go probably...
Oh yeah Drew Comika is the name I use for Youtube :)
Any Advice and criticism is much appreciated!!!
I liked it! I don't really have any advice. It was a 5 star animation in my opinion.
"GAME GRUMPS ANIMATED: WHHHHHHY?!?!"
Pros:
-You finished the animation.
-Great color choice for scene and the character design was awesome. I liked how ghost Danny looked.
-No issues with sound
Con:
- I don't judge art styles, but I do judge animation! You use tweens for your animation and it works. Although with movements such as Danny getting hit by the arrow and falling to the ground fast enough to break the sound barrier is kinda hard to ignore. You can even use tween to animate him falling. I know how much of a pain frame by frame can be.
Conclusion:
I give it 3.5 stars
This was great! I love Game Grump animations and yours is a welcome addition to the hall of GG animations. Keep up the great work!