Interesting art styles like the other vids.
I won't address the topic as I have already in other reviews.

The narration really needs work. It sounds like a screen reader.
It took away from the emotion of the short.
It sounds like you are very young or English is a second language.

The was very little animation, but what was there was nice, simple yet elegant.
The colours matched the tone of the piece.

It's obviously a topic that you care about.