Really nice job with this. You know know your art isn't great, but as strange as it seems you manage to be a good animator despite being a mediocre artist. You got bad drawings that move well. The drawings aren't necessarily that bad, though. The thing that bothered me the most was how high the girl's boobs were.

There were a couple of places where the humor fell flat. When all that treasure randomly falls out the guy's ass right when he denies being a thief, it feels cheesy and cliche. And when the villain says the plot needs an antagonist, that nearly ruins the whole story. You gotta decide whether you're taking this story seriously or not. You can go with the Newgrounds tradition of wacky nonsense comedy, but that doesn't seem to be what this is. You seem to be trying to get your audience to be invested in this, and so your characters are going to need motivations.

I wanna say really good job with the sound effects. I know sound is always a bitch, and your sound design stood out to me as skillfully done.

This was great I can't wait for the next one!!! Awesome job!!

It would have more fun if your characters are a little bit better. What do you think?

Good stuff, looking forward to the next episode.

I liked the use of 3d environments, it made the action and the drawings less flat. It worked great in the opening.
The voice acting was also nice and clean. Sounded good.

The only thing that pulled me out of it, was the meta antagonist joke. Dont know if you want to make this meta? Maybe it will be occuring more often in future episodes, but right now It caught me of guard.

I do hope you will be getting that cintiq and would love to see what you will create next.

Em.

You did this? With a mouse..? Kudos, I am very impressed. I can't wait to see what you can do with a Cintiq. It definitely helped me. Check out EBay before buying new. You sir have a new fan. All my stars are belong to you.