Notbad

So this was notbad at all it was actually pretty good but kind of short what I liked the most about this was that the animation was very fluid and just flowed along so nice animation just kind of short I look forward to more

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Make it longer

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wow! it was unexpected, but also fast, fluid animation, and beautifully done!
good work with the whole animation!
it had quick FPS (how much?), and a nice design.
good face expressions, and a cute story going on.

it only needs a preloader and/or a play-replay button, but other than that, its OK.
keep it up!

Very nicely animated.

Somewhere between sun and woman she looks a bit like a fish hmm, like an Easter egg on evolution. :) Overall it's a simple but sweet short, FBF is smooth, though it feels like it all passes a bit too quickly. Line work seems thinner and more detailed in the beginning too, and a bit thicker/rushed towards the end. A little refining and this'd be great! Keep it going.

-cd-

Nice toon.
I would like to see a bit more colour but i appreciate the style!
nice one!