You are a very good storyboad-artist, your feel for the right perspective in the frames is great and the screen change between the artworks, together with the well chosen soundtrack, build up a strong tension for the viewers.

However, since this is only the prelude to the "final fight" scene (I asume) I can't say anything about the story arc and the characters so far. But I've seen a lot storyboards that weren't so clear in sight & sound, you sure deserve praise for what you did so far.

I sure hope to see more of it, and since I can almost sense some self-doubt in your soul: Believe in your self, do your best but don't be to perfectionistic with every detail - would be a shame if the world would never see your complete opus.

Wow! Great job on this one! Really liked the art style of this, and I really loved the music worked very well.

Lots of depth, cool character design, I love it. I would really consider speeding it up though. If you have to speed up the music it well be worth it, pacing is everything. You don't have to do it by too much, but unless you have a lot of interesting animation going on in each of those sections of the storyboard I would consider it. Good job!

Its very rare where an original idea (through storyboard mind you) can grab somebodies attention. I look forward to whatever form this project will shape into.

Great stuff, i see what you mean by ambitious!
I think your art is amazing, your direction is amazing, even the story boards were put together well for this short. The music set the tone well and it felt like reading a comic. No dialogue or story was needed for this short, the art moved the story forward that well.

My only one criticism is that i think your writing/story idea doesn't do your art justice. I say this in the sense that i feel like every other manga i watch has this scene. It's to the point i feel like the mold needs to be broken by great artists like yourself.

having said that i think your project twill be amazing even if it only is half as good as the story boarding.
Great Job!!