The way Frisk intently held that [SAVE] star.
Loavania
The way Frisk intently held that [SAVE] star.
Nice. U should post this on Youtube lol
i did
The animation is great here, but I think the line-work could use a bit more effort. Especially when they are walking towards each other, you can see lines where they shouldn't be at. Also I recommend using Swivel so the animation is not on loop. It's free so it should be no problem to get. It's alright for what it is, but I think it could be a bit better. But still, keep it up!
The idea, though already used quite a lot, is nice and well executed. It's quite short and simple though, I would have liked it if you had put just a few more "in combat" animation than the ones we see. Also, I could not help but think the audio was not of such a good quality : considering the fact that the video is "inspired" by the audio, I find that a bit sad
Still, I liked it (hence the maybe generous 3 stars? I dont know), and I think that by training and polishing your drawings, using better audio and adding a few more original animations, your next animations can be of a high quality.
Keep it up
Some of the lines could be cleaner, but animation-wise this was really good.