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Somewhere Other Arc 3: Old Ties

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Goodness, it’s finally here! I’m so happy to finally share this with you!

Much thanks to Mc-Jimmy (http://mc-jimmy.newgrounds.com/) for allowing me to use their music.

Edit - I'm a dummy who doesn't know how to use the publish setting properly!

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Great format for this series, I just think it'd be great to add some inarticulate sounds as character voices. And yeah, dialogue was a bit too fast. But I think this is a step in a good direction!

cecameron responds:

Thanks very much! I'll definitely keep the speed in mind. The sound idea is awesome, I might give that a go.

I really wish the pacing was a tad slower, because i would love to make a fandub of this character.

But its well designed and interesting.

cecameron responds:

I might slow it down some, as a couple of people have said it's a bit fast. Thank ya! (Also a fan dub would be RAD.)

I think there was a lot of work went into this its good to see people working on some toons.

The pace was much too fast fort a text driven dialogue.
The expressions were too much on the moon guy and made me hate, who i think is meant to be the hero...
I think if you spent a little more time on understanding expressions you would be able to portray a clear emotional context.
Over all this could have a lot of refinement.

A positive i thought there was potential in the animations and drawings.
still a good effort!

cecameron responds:

Thank you for your comments! I'll definitely give it consideration for future projects.

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