Another great short.

I think there were issues with the sound quality.
The mix needs to be worked on, atm it is muddy, everything mashing together nothing in it's own space. The music/sfx themselves were well timed and appropriate just levels were poor.

With out knowing where the actor/writer comes from it sounds like English is not their first language. It removes me from the story as things sound a little clumsy.
Writing and acting in your native tongue with the use subtitles will leave you with a more immersive/ emotionally connective short.

If the artist teamed up with a more refined writer and good audio team some really brilliant work could be produced.

The art was fantastic again such amazing vision i really enjoyed it. I thought the animations were a little rough but i appreciate the style and enjoyed it thoroughly.
I really think there is a lot of potential in the style and can't wait to see it develop!