I will say the artwork is alright and everything, but this has some problems. There could be some color in this other than black and white. You could actually animate more rather than have a slideshow of different pictures. The audio quality is pretty bad. I recommend Audacity so you can take out the background noise and make your lines sound alot better. I also recommend Swivel so your animation is not on loop. Both programs are free so it should be no problem to get. I hope some of this advice will help you out in the future. Good luck!
yeah thanks shaeguy
sound levels are off, can't make out the voice over the music so turning the volume up doesn't help
yeah...i have this problem