This could be good with a little more work. There wasn't much of a story on this one. There was a fuzziness to the movements sometimes; not like general blur, but like an arm was half see-through in a frame, and it didn't blend into the movement once the frames were in motion. Take a bit more time with the photos and your pics will be clearer. The more pics you take, the smoother the movements will be. You are getting better, though.

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Look, let me tell ya
Hope theres no hard feeling, but must be honest
This is a waste of potential, I mean, as I can see here, you can actually make really awesome stop motions, yeah, maybe not as the professionals, but with practice could be similar
This kind of stuff are about take your time
Be patient, and the results will worth a lot :D