Mostly, for a "stick animation", I'd advise you stay with sticks... There's no need in the big guy with a gun, since he could be just a stick with a different color. You see? There's a whole lot you an do with sticks, so don't just decide I'm sending an abusive post. I can get to relate to sticks in good story telling, so don't think this is just to shoot you down. Check out Stcikpage.com... You'll start to see what you might compete against (yeah, just in stick animation) from there... I really hope you get together more material, 'cause this wasn't a lot to judge by... did my best with what I saw... had... well, you know.