My only nitpick is that it could've been slowed down some. Besides that, the animation and artwork was pretty great! Love the line work in this. Keep it up! :)
I created the story, the music composition. The drawings and background were all done by myself. All credit goes to me and if you like and comment I might continue the story if I get enough people comments. I know how to speak proper English I just chose not to. Thank you for watching, enjoy. Drawn in Photoshop and animated using Monkey Jam.
My only nitpick is that it could've been slowed down some. Besides that, the animation and artwork was pretty great! Love the line work in this. Keep it up! :)
Thanks for the advice, I have changed the main file to a video at half speed. Thank you also for the complement it means a lot to me. Thank You.