This was nice
So this was nice I like the vibe of this one you really come up with some nice ideas here some really nice effects too so really cool element here I like your style and the direction of this film was nice some good humor and the story was notbad either
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A fun film no changes needed
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Heh, badass intro coming soon too? :P And heeey, that paper brings with it great hopes and revelations! Awesome. Also a pretty solid script, the one pun nicely presented after that one punch. Whatever happened to the voice act though? Writing works, but sound is on another level entirely. As for the 'save me' on the umbrella, bit strange it's on the umbrella? Was the umbrella controlling the guy, or the guy the umbrella, or was he simply locked up and had to be punched out to be free? If so, it's weird he'd initiate a fight, and not just ask the grand OPS to blow a hole in the wall.
Bit baffling that part, but overall this was grand. Short but nicely done! Also: one more thing that'd add to the graphics I thiink: is background, one that stretches further, horizons, objects far away that add to the sense of distance and dimension. Looking forward to the next ep!
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Lol thanks man. The save me part is a reference to umbrella's story. He is being held captive as an assassin. He has a disease that is eventually going to kill him so he wants to escape to find the cure. The story i put out just follows other characters stories. Like most of the characters aren't made up. Theve been around for long time. Just watch a few umbrella vids and you will know what im talking about. Thanks for the advice though. ill deffinetly try in the next ep.