This was pretty interesting, eager to see what comes next. The narration idea is pretty cool, would recommend adding some background music at one point if you continue this. Other than that, can't wait to see what happens next!
The time of the champions is upon us once more. Only this time the universe has chosen an earthling as one of it's champions. Join us as we embark on our journey across the universe and follow the adventures of champion number 7 and his friends.
This was pretty interesting, eager to see what comes next. The narration idea is pretty cool, would recommend adding some background music at one point if you continue this. Other than that, can't wait to see what happens next!
Not a bad start. Lets see what you intend to do with this.