UnTown episode 5.5

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Sorry if this came out of completely no where. XD

Episode Description:
On Mia's little sisters birthday, Marcy gets taken by an escaped experiment (Obly) to deep underground. Mia has to quickly get her back before she is lost forever. And in other problems be grounded for good. Scott Accompanies her with this quest, what will come out of this adventure?

Episode six is still in production, just had to whip up this one first.

Crystal Dennis as- Mia
Ryoma Ishizuka as- Scott
Bree Page as- Marcy
DynoStorm as- Obly

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"I kinda like you quiet" Fucking Savage m8

Pallid you have come along way since the First episode of Untown was launched on NG. Maybe it was do to me bugging you to get better, or maybe it's the people you surround yourself with now. But I have to say, you are really coming into your own with this little series of yours!

A few minor complaints, [Which I've probably thrown at you a dozen times on skype and stuff, but whatever]

I feel like the episode should have had shown a bit more, and maybe have a bit better of a reaction to certain things. When Mia dropped the Tracker fluid, it kind of felt like a Jump cut. Also when Mia saw her sister tied up and she just did nothing, with some off screen dialog, I feel like it could have been handled a bit better. Maybe some animation of her sister struggling, or maybe a reaction shot from Mia, that could have made that scene a bit better.

And Finally, please consider adding Cheating out Positions for the character models. It will give you so much more range with the puppets, and make things look less flat.

Anyway, I have to say this is probably your Best work yet, the pacing was on point for the most part, and there was a lot smoother animation then your previous works. Keep at it, and keep improving. I'm rooting for you buddy. And I'll annoy you to git gud until I die. And don't worry, you can annoy me also.

Credits & Info

3.35 / 5.00

Jan 10, 2016
5:54 PM EST
Comedy - Original
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