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Feeling DBZ (Pilot) 2

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more coming soon, please comment. this is just a quick preview. still working and editing. thanks


I like how any of us whose watched DBZ as a kid could probably relate to the guy watching the show onscreen, lol.

The animation was also really good, though there was a huge contrast between what was on the T.V and with the guy sitting in the living room. The drawing and animation of the guy on the couch just seemed more limited.

not bad cuz of the guy screaming kaio ken u got 4 starz yahhhh

It felt like it was building up to something nice, but I started to lose interest towards the end when it was just talking. I know in the comments it says that there is still more coming etc, so it can be a bit hard to judge if it isn't the full thing.
To improve the end of this one, possibly cut to some reaction shots of the guy watching. Hope this helps :)

XxFalopioxX responds:

thanksfor the suggestion and i actually doing that, zoom in the tv and forget the guy in the sofa. i kinda of like it. everythingbis more easy with a pen display.

Not my Language but Loved the Artwork!!

XxFalopioxX responds:

thanks, i want to do it in english but maybe next proyect. ☺☺

It's pretty standard at most. Nothing really says "Oh my god! You have to watch this!", but it's not too bad. The color scheme is legit, but the animation could be just a little bit better, and the same thing can be said about the audio. But hopefully it'll look better after you get done with the editing and the work you're putting into it. Good luck!

XxFalopioxX responds:

thanks and yes, i still editing and re-editing and adding more animation, sounds , better timing and more fluid. its kinda of my first work in a Cintiq HD 13" Touch and wants some feedback, still dont know how long it will take me to finish thiis proyect. again thanks for the feed back.

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2.20 / 5.00

Jan 1, 2016
6:15 PM EST
Comedy - Parody