Nice concept
Enticing is what this was and you have a nact for this sort of stuff and allthough there are some things that could be improved but I will get to that later in this review, but Quite Frankly this was a great start to what I hope will be a fantastic idea turned into flash adventure. You have a nice concept here, I really love the black and white on this, but most of all really like the spots of color and such, I do wish you had more of a story here but you really made a nice idea here, and I can see it propelling into something even more. Also the "RANDOM" you presented here was really awsome though. And once again I must say that was a pretty good entry something differant but I liked it for what it is, Wish there was more like this, but for what it is, its pretty interesting and entertaining ofcourse.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was a certainly good flash if you ask me, but it could be better with a few suggestions and ideas, Theres a number of things and ways you could go about it Great concept with this one, but needs more of a story base you have the animations down and the detail just put it together in a great kind of story.
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