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Madness: DD (short)

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Hello my nickname is DoMoDESIGN and I'm new in czmadness group. This is my first short, so please rate and comment because i need to know what make better!
If you like this animation follow my NG

Music by: JaThu

Special thanks to:
Djjaner
Krinkels
Cethic
JaThu

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HAHAHA I loved the McDonal's part, but the ending was kinda abrupt. And you used one of my songs! thanks for that too :D but next time tell me :C I would love to see more animations like this with my song on them :3

Keep it up.

DoMoDESIGN responds:

Thank you man and sorry :/

good job! dood

DoMoDESIGN responds:

Thank you man :D

Improvements: Use 30 fps. Make every body part move. Please add more effort in it. Add some story line or just write it in the description. Ask somebody to help you. Double check each body part. Check if there are any mistake. Add more time when animating. You need more physics like me.

I gave you half a star for adding some effort in it. Good luck next time, bro. Wish this helps you. And sorry for my bad English.

DoMoDESIGN responds:

Im glad to you for your comment, thank you :)

Dear DoMoDESIGN

Okay first things first. I was particularly annoyed by the music. It was only making sounds through my left ear. Secondly I saw some problems with the masking. Like how the guy with the kabuki mask (is it?) holds the gun the wrong way. Third some scenes were a bit confusing, what did Ronald mcdonald do? I guess that scene didn't really matter but why put it there? Is it a compilation of shorts? Fourth, there was no introduction...I mean like an intro to who, what, and how the character is and was. Since we're taken into the fight without any prior knowledge of what's really going on.

But anyways all in all animation is okay, you can improve upon that with time. Try to make animations a bit smooth though, work with the masking of corpses, the heads are trembling for some reason instead of it moving in unison with the body/

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

DoMoDESIGN responds:

Hello, rly thank you for you comment. I know I see to many problems but this is my first animation and I worked with flash first time. I must learn more about madness and practise. Im glad to you for your comment, have a nice day man :)

In the begining the sword flew in a guy whitout anyone`s help ....but is`s maddnes so who cares

DoMoDESIGN responds:

Sword leans on table XD I think :D maybe :D

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Score
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Uploaded
Dec 20, 2015
10:29 AM EST
Genre
Action