I haven't been keeping up with your work lately and now noticed you have uploaded lots of brand new submissions.
This new submission shows an improvement in your own drawing technique.
The bed room background has a lot of attention to detail.
The bedroom has a bit of clutter on the floor and the wall is covered in posters with details of it's own.
The posters on the wall can be improved by adding bits of tape to hang each poster.
Other props on the wall could be held by nails, tacks or whatever.
What matters is something holds the pictures up.
It's one more subtle extra detail to add to a series of already subtle details.
The girls playing the music have the same usual design of perfectly round heads.
Try to experiment with drawing different styles of jawlines for future characters.
Real people often have a variety of chins, jaws, noses, eyes and general facial features.
It is possible to draw a more stylized version of a real person.
Other cartoons draw stylized versions of people all the time.
I can list off examples from anime, cartoons, deviantart submissions, newgrounds submissions, youtube cartoons and other art forms.
The world of online animation has a surprising level of variety in genres, art styles and other possible entertaining factors.
I'm glad to see you are still creating new stuff and learning more with each new cartoon created.
Despite the evolution of your drawings, backgrounds and even improvement towards music created for this piece.
This submission was basically a simple looping animation.
I'm personally not a fan of overly simple animation loops to be perfectly honest.
I would like to see you create some animated skits, shorts, movies, games or whatever.
I'm very pleased to notice that you are still creating new stuff.
Keep up the good work.
- Mightydein