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Flirting 101

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First animation so it may be rough around the edges. Constructive criticism much appreciated. More to come soon.

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Not bad for a first animation, certainly a hell of a lot better than mine was haha. The joke wasn't really delivered all that well, the pacing was a bit too slow. The movements were too choppy, I'd suggest adding more inbetweens, also try to add easing, and more bounce effects to make fast movements look a lot better. Also for the faster movements, squash and stretch can really make it look more powerful. That's about it, I can't really judge the art, as I'm not really good enough at art to make a good judge of it.

TreeBoar responds:

After I uploaded I read about easing because the movements didn't look all that organic. Thanks for the advice. Judge away you're art is really solid.

It's a great first animation. Her face when it happens is just hilarious.

TreeBoar responds:

Thanks!

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Dec 17, 2015
7:23 PM EST