I have a few critiques with the first being that the graphics and animation where not great, they where however passable and not "vote-off" material. The movie was a bit short and could of been longer as well. That being said, for what it was, it was pretty funny. It gave me a chuckle and was a nice little mini-toon. Just think about working on the graphics and making an actual story with actual characters. It looks like you have potential. Keep up the good work!