I like it.
Hell, it's better than anything I could do. All I feel like recommending is practice. It's really fluid.
Glad you liked it, and I totally agree, practice is definitely a necessity.
Work on poses. Study anatomy. Make sure characters don't have same face. Work on perspective. Don't use paper backgrounds they are overdone and look bad. Motion is kind of there but put more motion into things make them look alive!
Alright, all of those things have been noted, thank you for your thoughts.
I mean, the motion is there I guess, but definitely work more on your drawings.
Yeah, I agree, that does need a lot of work. I've been trying to improve in that regard, and will continue to.
that is pretty good advice, don't be like Atomic Astro :)
Glad you agree.