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The Desire

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This is my fourth animated short.
Its not pixar level.. but i am really really slowly getting there. Hopefully.

Youtube version:
https://youtu.be/jz68g-bkIww

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-Constructive criticism, tips for next animations-
certain things are too slow, certain things too fast, try to balance.
think more clever ways to make things work, they are a tad bit obvious and/or weird.
improve fluidness of animation, in every situation. details make a masterpiece(should come naturally with practice)
But that's just my opinion as a viewer, I'm no animation master so... just do your best.

The cat model is quite off the level of the environment and its animations are really simple but... nice work in overall.

Massimiliano Ciullo - Ciullo Corporation