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The Desire

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This is my fourth animated short.
Its not pixar level.. but i am really really slowly getting there. Hopefully.

Youtube version:
https://youtu.be/jz68g-bkIww

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-Constructive criticism, tips for next animations-
certain things are too slow, certain things too fast, try to balance.
think more clever ways to make things work, they are a tad bit obvious and/or weird.
improve fluidness of animation, in every situation. details make a masterpiece(should come naturally with practice)
But that's just my opinion as a viewer, I'm no animation master so... just do your best.

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Uploaded
Nov 23, 2015
8:28 AM EST