One thing I can say is you really need to work on your pacing. It goes by way too fast. And the animation could use some work too. Just try harder next time. Good luck!
Have you always wanted to be a LumberJack? If so this is the video for you!!!
One thing I can say is you really need to work on your pacing. It goes by way too fast. And the animation could use some work too. Just try harder next time. Good luck!
Thank you for your constructive criticism, your comment also gave me more energy
to start working on my next one.
And yes next time I will work on my pacing!