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The Pan

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End result from too much cell phone use.

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A Nice bit of 3D animation. I would have liked to have seen more texture and detail on the character and I'm not sure about the lighting, I get that it's meant to be dark but maybe it's too much.

Is there meant to be a fire? I get that impression but it's not that clear. Also the yellow stuff he's sat on/in, wax? Other things I find the use of unclear are the back of the hand, visible from 00:29 to 00:46 they seem to be concave. Maybe spend more time building him and making sure there's no weird dips and bumps that don't add to the creepy but just look like a mistake. On a similar vein there's a jerky hand movement at 00:58 that could do with some attention.

3D can be a challenge but this isn't a bad stab at it. With more time spent in the planning/writing stage and practice on your technique you could do a lot better.

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1,093
Votes
150
Score
2.22 / 5.00

Uploaded
Sep 15, 2015
2:57 AM EDT