The Lost Dino

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I have made considerable progress in this piece. Thanks to lot of motivation and advice from the NG community, I m starting to enjoy doing content here.

I have not done perfect cleanup... I didnt organize my layers properly so it was messy, still managed to pull off decent one.
( Adobe Flash/ 8days)
What do you think?? awaiting ur honest response... Please critique or suggest...
I hav plans for a series u guys like this... :)

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Cute short animation. Some critiques:
In some parts the shadows didn't connect with the figures. The shadow should always sprout from the figure. The dinosaur fossil felt a bit flat, maybe add more shading to make it "POP". Animation was fairly solid, some parts weren't fully colored in but overall it was smooth and visually appealing. I enjoyed it and I look forward to more fully-fleshed animations from you in the future. :D

ShadeMachine responds:

Thanks for ur honest feedback bro...!!! Sure i will work on these areas... Shadows, Shading and ill flesh out characters better... Thanks again... :)

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3.13 / 5.00

Sep 8, 2015
4:01 AM EDT