I think background need detail. Also voice acting is plain.
This was a pretty good animation but there is one thing I don't like:
The backgrounds could've been drawn a lot better because they blurry and not that detailed
The animation itself was really great,I loved the style of it...the movements were smooth and the ending was quite funny.I give this animation a 4/5 and I'll be sure to subscribe to your youtube channel.
I like it! Keep up the good work!
Cheers bro! :D