its really well-done for a short flash animation!
the characters were nicely drawn, especially their faces and their poses, it looked quite realistic, even if it is a rough sketch....
very good work!
keep it up!
Hi, This is my submission for an contest, As you can see it needs work, did this in flash, I was wondering what you guys think?? Please feel free to comment/ review... cheers..!!
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its really well-done for a short flash animation!
the characters were nicely drawn, especially their faces and their poses, it looked quite realistic, even if it is a rough sketch....
very good work!
keep it up!
There's some marshmallow dialogue, the drawing is pretty bland, the audio is dreadful, and it's impossible to conceive a possible understanding of the plot. If there is any.
I'm giving it a three because its rather incomplete. I would like to commend you for the voice acting and Mr. Anderson's movements. His hand gestures add an organic feel to the animation, specially when he threw a piece of paper from his hand. I'm sure with some color, a bit more frames to smooth-en the animation and a lengthier clip, this will rate higher.