I like the animation for the most part, but think you should sharpen your stuff just a tad more. (Writing, art style) That extra polish would really make it cooler! If you shine it up I am sure you could make front page someday!
First animation so pardon the bad quality.
I like the animation for the most part, but think you should sharpen your stuff just a tad more. (Writing, art style) That extra polish would really make it cooler! If you shine it up I am sure you could make front page someday!
Thank you!! I highly appreciate the advice ^^
nice man haha i like the bad animation its good
Thanks man cx i appreciate it haha