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Dog in Space

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This is my first flash animation. Animating is hard but I think I like the pain

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Love how the dog see's the entire galaxy, comes back, and decides f**k these babies because.

While it did get me to chuckle on the close up of the dog's face, I thought the whole thing was pretty lackluster. The opening scene took up way too much time. That's my biggest complaint with the whole thing. That and it would've really benefited from music and sound. I know there's no sound in space, but its a cartoon, so it'll work. Trust me. If you make another space-based cartoon and you include a scene in space with sound in it and someone says "lol theirs no s0und in space, m8", I want you to get a hold of me so I can beat that guy up.

StealthyBurrito responds:

I appreciate the feedback! Thank you

super cute!
keep up the good work.

The pain is wonderful, embrace it!

You should have put in some kind of song or sounds to it. Felt kinda empty to watch it.. or a narrotor!

But keep on working, aaa-wooh!

To be honest, it wasn't that great.

There was no sound, and all of your animations consisted of tweens. You're definitely off to a decent start though, and I like your use of framing. However, this has a long way to go before it can be considered a decent Flash movie.

Advice: Do more animating, add some music at least, have a preloader, end on a proper sequitur. I'm afraid there's a lot more pain ahead, but maybe it'll be worth it.

Best of luck,

StealthyBurrito responds:

Thank you for the constructive criticism!

Credits & Info

2.18 / 5.00

Aug 8, 2015
4:46 PM EDT