Not a bad animation, but the sound effects need some extra work, and also a "T" rate would be more adequate for this, because of the "ecchi factor" and violence.
oh right :P
Wow,This is really good,I can see you spent a lot of time doing it.All you need to do now is add more sound effects(heres a link:https: //www.freesound.org/browse/ ) and music ( http://incompetech.com/music/royalty-free/ ) And you'll start getting 5 stars ratings. ;)
thank you so much
Great action. A bit slow and choppy though. Looks like movie maker
is movie maker