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Officer Tommy (Tortoise) and Office Harry (Hare) investigate a local crime ring at a coffee shop. Mayhem and chaos ensue!

Youtube link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nG9ozi0AMqQ

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I think i can see this as a series. the thing is the character voices they need more drama, like spongebob with all the yelling and screaming and the crazies! the voices sounded very poor, you problaly did this in your room and had to keep from making too much noise, I understand that but if you maybe try to bring it up a notch. at least until you get a chance to own your own mini studio, or move to the garage (if you have one) and let people know that your going to use it for your projects. other than that it's pretty good love to see how the story would develop.

Very interesting. I liked the espresso guys and the concept that strong coffee makes them strong. X)

ML30883 responds:

Thanks! The Espresso robbers seem to be viewer's faves. Maybe i'll make another short centered around them

This is pretty decent. Animation is decent, I liked some of the jokes.

but I felt like a lot of the dialogue and the action scenes fell flat.
The espresso robots delivered especially uninspired performances, and it was actually difficult to hear what they were saying at some point.

I liked it somewhat, although I think I like the overall concept better than the execution.
Still, it wasn't bad.

ML30883 responds:

Thanks!

2:26 F*CK!

There is great comedic timing. This the idea and the character designs really makes for an energetic good time. And while i enjoy a barrage of puns, there's a lot in the humor and the set up that doesn't quite gel with me.
Why isn't Tommy letting Harry in? Tommy says he's the reason... and get's cut off with the whole "Will you let me finish" joke which falls flat for me as i find it very forced.
Espresso seems to gain strength from the strong coffee, makes sense cause he's pretty much a sentient coffee cup, but Tommy also get's strong? why?
It's mostly forced things like that which bother me.
I like the animation a lot and keep at it!

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Score
4.02 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 21, 2015
11:12 AM EDT
Genre
Comedy - Original
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