don't get me the wrong way. I really encourage you on making these! want to make sure the future ones will be as great.
so please don't let my critique pull any nerves. you could jus ignore if its not the time or day.

1: when you explain it should be more planned, you hesitated a lot there.

2: ive watched a lot of tutorials. you need to speak up more and have more confidence in your voice! if you whisper like that, people wont really stick around for "a new user made tutorial" for 20 minutes. when people look into a long tutorial, they really push themselves to do it. so you gotta be prepared to deliver exciting, bundle of quick learning, striking voice right there man

3: its not really "attractive" to the viewer to look at a drawing that's small/not zoomed. im looking at 5:55, and all that resemble that moment in the video.

you don't have to follow these advice. I jus wanna help ya out yknow?

anyways, I loved the tutorial. I look forward to more of your posts!