Its nice to see something so stylistic.

the rating needs to be changed to T for teenage or M for a mature audience.

Nice work, I liked a lot the animation style and music, the story felt a little slow paced but not too much. I think this would be better rated as "T" instead of "E" because of the "implicit" sexual content.

Your art style is interesting, and the writing isn't too bad. However you do seem to have issues with frame rate, and your audio sounds compressed. Those are two glaring issues I would suggest you work on.

The combination of artistic direction and surprisingly humorous ending is amazing!

Voice acting is a bit slow and quality could be better. Drawings are simple but attractive, but I think it would have been better to have a dark brown on tan instead of black on white.

I felt like the animation was a little too simple for its own good at times. For instance, having landscapes pan at different speeds would give the illusion of perspective. A few instances of bad animation make this appear confusingly suggestive.

It's also worth saying that this goes by way too slowly. Halfway into the animation literally all I knew was that there was a shoemaker dancing with a girl who had magic shoes. I mean really, "Sold a pair of shoes (beat) went home (beat) and WAITED (beat)." #relatable

I found the minimalist caricatures were a reach that you didn't quite grasp. I really couldn't distinguish the characters from one another. Who attacked the woman? What was their relation to the shoemaker - hell, were they the same person?

As with most of the animation, the ending left me feeling unsatisfied with no real closure to ten minutes of a very boring animation.