I don't know jack about Game Grumps but I know the basic concept of these animations. Take some existing audio and build an animation around it. Your animation is actually pretty good as well as being expressive and fitting really well with the voices, but for something this short you shouldn't have left this as minimalistic as it was. You could have easily afforded to amp the smoothness of the movements and completely color in and texture the environment and characters. Also this just has very little replay value or entertainment as a whole.
GO JON GO - Jon Grumps
I hope I've captured a good amount of Jontron in this one. ECH.
Okay so the story about this short little animation was, I've had this certain voice clip for over a year that I got from tumblr, that always made me laugh. I have absolutely NO idea from what episode it is, so if anybody wants to share, please let me know.
And yes, I know it's short. After the first one I went a while without animating and wanted to make this quickie to get back in the groove. Expect more soon! Something original hopefully!
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Swordticus responds:
Thank you for the feedback. And you're totally right, this was VERY lazy and minimalistic. That's because early on I noticed how badly planned out it was layer wise and everything so a lot of it was in fact simplified to not get a headache from it. This was mostly made as practice since I was pretty rusty in the first place.
But you're totally right, so thank you for your honest opinion. I'll make sure to put my all in my next animation to come.
Practice makes perfect. For now, you're saved.
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