awesome!
Author Comments
CAN THEY ESCAPE?!!?!
Boy this took A LOT longer than it should have. It got to the point where it was more of a chore than a fun hobby. Over the time it was rewritten countless times and my style changed as well. Eventually I buckled down and finished it. But yeah it was fun in the beginning. Enjoy entering into the mind of a fifteen year old. THANK YOU FOR WATCHING!
Youtube Link: https://youtu.be/3-hRkpkWUQ0
Music:
We are the Champions (instrumental)- Queen
Also sprach Zarathustra- Karl Bohm
A lot of youtube audio library songs I should have written down
THANKS AGAIN!
Haha I really enjoyed this! The story and jokes were clever, reminds me of Regular Show's story structure. Additionally the amount of work probably put in to make a cartoon this long is very impressive. Things to improve upon could be your linework and cleanup to make the characters alot more solid and appealing. Backgrounds could definitely be improved. Also for your animations I would use alot more anticipation, and refer to the animation principles for extra help. Keep making animations, I am excited for more!
steambeaver responds:
Thx Man! I appreciate the constructive criticism. I will definitely improve on the linework, backgrounds, and overall animation as I continue.